Trial Of Film Pitch

Our Average Feedback Score was 51/70

The General our average feedback was that there wasn't enough interest described in the pitch about the opening scene which would get people’s attention to want to watch it. This was our fault was with obviously didn't deliver it clearly in the pitch we gave. Our marketing, Film title and Convention all scored very highly which shows that our ideas to get it on the market are good and that the title was catchy and will get people to want to watch it.

The parts we believe we need to improve on from the feedback we received are improving the depth of information given on the opening scene of our pitch and possibly changing some of the actors for some more high end film stars to help the film sell.

To Break audience expectations the main character will switch sides and turn on his od friends causing a twist in the film that no one would see coming.