LAP Chart 1

Task and objectives	Stage of Completion/ Deadlines	State Self/Peer or Teacher Assessment	Looking at task and objectives as well as the level criteria comments - what went well and even better if	Improvement and Analysis (how have you taken those comments on board and improved)
Set up blog/labels/posts		SELF	Completed	I removed unnecessary Labels and  made sure all my work had the correct labels.
Genre task – opening sequence analysis		PEER	Generally good but could have more detail	Improved the detail.
Semiotics/Image analysis		SELF		Fixed the title
Demonstrate understanding of genre with film pitch		TEACHER	Good detailed pitch which has put a lot of thought of genre and what it feels. How will it be different?	Explained how the film is different to other films.
Evaluation of film pitch		PEER	Very detailed and explained well could show more film similar to it?	Added more films to the mood board.
Know how to apply  Barthes narrative theory		TEACHER
Representation		TEACHER	Some theory write up. Add the others discussed. The magazine is representing women as opposed to itself. Discuss their representation.	Fixed to the representation so it’s about women not the magazine and discussed the representation.
Film language (camera, editing, sound and mes) Shot analysis		TEACHER	Not uploaded yet.	Uploaded
Task and objectives		State Self/Peer/Teacher Assessment	Looking at task and objectives as well as the level criteria comments - what went well and even better if	Improvement and Analysis (how have you taken those comments on board and improved)
Opening scene analyses (3) Camera, editing, sound and mise en scene		TEACHER	God father is not opening scene but mise en scene work is good. Nothing on sound or camera shots.	Spoke about sound and camera shots.
Big budget/Small		TEACHER	Not uploaded	Uploaded.
Juno task		PEER	Juno task was good but tracking shot needs improvement.	Didn’t have time to change but made sure it doesn’t happen in prelim task.
Preliminary Task (storyboard, plan, script, final edited version)   uploaded onto blog		TEACHER	Video has been uploaded. Storyboard and script needs to be uploaded.	Storyboard and script uploaded.
Prelim Task evaluation (what do you and others think of the task)		TEACHER	No evaluation uploaded.
Past student video evaluations (notes from class, using exam criteria)		TEACHER	Work done on this of other videos of past pupils but they are not in the video.	Added more than one video of past student evaluations.
BLOG CHECK - Overall look and feel of blog.		TEACHER	Appear to have many labels that don’t seem to have any actual work in them.	Fixed labels all work is now organised.